That's ... readable, not the worst I've seen. Story itself getting more and more interesting so I gonna stay.
Josuke slowly regains consciousness, except for the fact he had a heartache. He went to grab his head, but couldn't.
I guess you mean headache.
"My name is Josuke Higashikata, I'm from Morioh, Japan. My friends and I were tracking down a stand user named Yoshikage Kira, a stand user, and monster who isn't human. He's a serial killer who killed countless lives, women's lives to be exact. The reason why is because of their hands. Whatever hands that catches his attention, he'll go after his victim, kill them, and take their hand. All because of his love for hands. *Tch* Bastard killed some good people that didn't deserve to die. What's worse is that we were so close to stopping him, he used his stand's power to escape. He succeeds, somewhat. He has the power to turn anything, ANYTHING, into a bomb! He also has the ability to turn back an hour of time, at least that's what I've heard from a kid who was with him."
Yah missed such a good opportunity for Josuke to quote Kira here.
"Jotaro, what's wrong? You look pale, is something? What did he say?"
So 2019 then?
10151076 take your pick. I wanted to include this year but I went with the 20XX thing.
That's ... readable, not the worst I've seen. Story itself getting more and more interesting so I gonna stay.
I guess you mean headache.
Yah missed such a good opportunity for Josuke to quote Kira here.
This "is something" is really out of place.
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