- Member Since 27th Dec, 2012
- offline last seen Aug 31st, 2022
Brony117
Like fanfics? Read my fanfics! Feedback is welcomed! ^_^
Brony117
Joined 27th Dec, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Paulli · 18k words · 47 2 · 2.2k views
- luckyboys121 · 34k words · 132 7 · 4.4k views
- S Comet · 5.1k words · 44 7 · 2.6k views
- DontFearTheSuperman · 13k words · 18 2 · 296 views
- Dragon-In-Black · 14k words · 35 4 · 1.3k views
- TenTa · 11k words · 28 1 · 1.7k views
- ShirtMechanic · 21k words · 65 12 · 3.1k views
Featured In1
Stats
Page generated in 0.445 seconds
Total duration
953 users online
1,645,583 hits today, 2,814,898 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Not bad, definitely interested in seeing where this is going.
I would have thought the second Cinch threaten his mother, Jojo would of Ora her to death?
Damn, now that is way too low for Cinch. She just made the worst mistake of her life, she dared to mess with Jotaro.
If this now in the now in the present day, let's say 2019, Phantom Blood and Battle Tendency are now in 1918 and 1969 respectively then?
Lol, imagining Part 3 Jotaro in Crystal Prep's uniform with his bulging muscles. Is he like in Equestria Girls style but muscular like Bulk Biceps or is everyone else in JoJo style?
MOAR!!!
I need more
Wait a minute, what!? Everyone greeting Sci-Twi thinking she’s Princess Twilight, okay that’s what happened but Jotaro? Are you saying Jotaro has an Equestrian counterpart and the HuMane 6 can see Star Platinum!? OH.MY.GOD!
this is so good!
OHHHH NOOOOO!
HORRY SHIIIIIT!
(Joseph's my favorite Joestar for the record. :P)
I love how the story is panning out, and can't wait to see Jotaro fight Twilight when she becomes evil. But lets face a hard truth, Jotaro could at any moment Ora Ora Principle Cinch to death the second she threaten his mom. Especially with Star Platinum The World abilities and gotten away before anyone knew what happened.
But that me, can't wait for the chapter!
It was Joseph, wasn’t it, who hacked the computers? Cue Bloody Stream!
Also, some typos
Should be “they’re” as in “they are”
Should be “stared”
9867347
That's assuming he's even able to without consequences. We don't know for sure how she's threatening her yet. We only know she suggested at a hitman but didn't confirm it. For all we know she "could" have a hitman that operates by kill codes. If he/she doesn't get the order to call it off within a certain timeframe, then it won't matter if time is frozen and Cinch is ORAORAORAed, Jotaro's mom will die anyway at anytime like Cinch implied. It could be by sniper rifle or bazooka missile, even a rocket launcher. Or it could be she has a Stand that she could use to kill using any method we haven't thought of yet.
Now that you've done a Star Platinum: The World, I wonder if your gonna have any dialogue variants to it like in the Dub such as "Star Platinum, unleash The World!"
MOAR!!!!!
No
Don't you do it
I knew it!
Off to a real good start... I hope Jotaro get's to use Star Platinum to give Cinch what she deserves before the stories over.
Really starting to ship Jotaro and Twilight now and considering that apparently pony Jotaro and Twilight are called a "power couple" looks like that ship will will indeed sail. Regardless still really enjoying the story, and can't wait to see what happens next (If Jotaro tells Joseph that Hollies in danger we won't even have to wait too long for Cinch to get her beating as I'm sure he could come up with a plan to get them all out of this)
All caught up and LOVING IT! Can't wait to see what happens next. Also, since the Humane 6 don't know about all the stuff Jotaro and Joseph have been through, does that mean pony Jotaro didn't fight a pony Dio or anything?
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
Having Midnight Sparkle be a bit like Dio was admittedly expected, but going all out with the Road Roller and everything was FREAKIN AWESOME!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter and for Cinch to get what she deserves!! (mainly a series of ORAs that makes Steely Dan's look like a love tap)
I'm sorry, but, rehashing the fight vs DIO right down to the road roller meme didn't really work. I was hoping you'd do something more original.
9917133
Yeah not my best work on this chapter. Hopefully later down the road the fights will be better.
9917133
I would say that Twilight didn't try to do Za Warudo yet so I guess it won't be really Dio vs Jotaro fight
9917398
She froze him with magic instead of stopping time, the difference is academic.
would've been better if the road roller was replaced with a school bus
9925375
How would that sound? 'Here's a bus for you!' Or 'You got a bus to catch!' Actually that last one sounded better..
This is great for me since I just finished stardust crusaders.
Nigerundayo!
Once again LOVED THE CHAPTER
Not only was Cinch's beatdown everything I wanted and more but, while I already figured Joseph would find out about the assassin early and stop all this (because no one can out plan JOSEPH JOESTAR!) but having him discover it because of the turtle was classic JoJo humor and better then anything I could have thought of
Eagerly awaiting the slice of life chapters coming up (hope to see some more good moments between Twilight and Jotaro to fuel the shipping fire) and especially excited for the next arc (whether that be Jotaro at Camp Everfree, Twilight in Morioh, an adaptation of the novel "Twilight's Sparkly Sleepover Surprise" that fills the gap between the movies, or whatever original story you might have come up with.)
I guess nobody cares about Flash. Why even bother to mention that?
9960508
For fun of course.
So this is only the first arc, then? Fantastic! Hope to see the girls look more into Jotaro's past, especially his journey to Egypt. Also see what Equestrian Jotaro is like and how similar and different he is. Also, I knew Joseph Joestar manipulated the Crystal Prep computer, called it! Cue Bloody Stream!
9961620
You're welcome.
9961633
Thank you, some more line predicting would be appreciated, too.
9962514
I'll need to work on that if Joseph or anyone will be able to get a chance to do that. But hey, I'll do my best!
Ha! This was funny.
The only thing that kinda bugs me is there being an Equestrian Jotaro as well. I'll save further judgement to see how you play it, since I'm guessing he'll show up at some point.
OHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! HERE COMES THE PAIN! THE ENEMY STANDOS HAVE APPEARED!
So now suddenly we're in the middle of Bites The Dust... honestly not what I expected but definitely enjoyable (part 4 is my favorite, and Josuke my favorite JoJo, nice touch at him not understanding English by the way)
Curious to see what happens next, whether this be a simple vision of the future or if they actually somehow time traveled. Whatever it is I can't wait to find out
At least she didn't watch it
No way. NO. WAY.
JOOOOOOOOOOOOOSUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUKEEEEEEEEEEE!
Cinch pissed off Jotaro if she knew what happened to the last guy she would be begging for his forgiveness
Just use Star Platinum The World, and freeze time to get to class on time! That's what I'd do!
Oh gods.....I'm getting flashbacks....IGGY!
As in
NIGERUNDAYOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahah..............ah!
Poor JoJo.
Classic
Creative Stand use!
The stand is the sun!
ThE StAnD Is tHe SuN!!
THE STAND IS THE SUN!!!
Tower of Gray!