Very impressive so far, especially for a first story. Writing was good with enough world building and convincing character interaction. I'll have to finish up the rest of it later though.

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Actually, I have written a bit in other fandoms. I’ve got accounts on deviantart and Fanfiction.net. I should probably edit it to say “first story in this site”.

“WHAT?! Are you kidding me?! That bitch mind controlled me! And raped me! And-” he was stifled by a hoof to his mouth courtesy of Cadance.

Finally a story where Shining reacts properly to being raped!

Interesting premise. Love Cadence's support of Shining.