I thought something was off from the start. I was right. There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes. Only way to improve, though, is to fix those, at least, at the moment.

Wouldn't bluebelle be more surprised at the fact she became an alicorn? Also i found some spelling errors

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I tried to fix as many errors as I could find. Thanks for pointing that out.

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Your welcome. Blood guard is an interesting name for bluebelles guards

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Now to wait for the next part of the story.

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It's going to happen... Eventually.

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I hope blueblood gets retrbution for this.

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We'll see.

Bluebelle better hope Rarity isn't in the mood for a beat down. A verbal beatdown.