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Chrome Masquerade
Dashing do-gooder dog? Accomplished, affable aeronaut? Big-time brony? Lazy lackluster lackwit? You decide!
Chrome Masquerade
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Why isn't there a sex tag?
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Because I'm terrible at clop sequences, but I might add that for implications. Thanks for the idea
I'm actually interested to what happens next
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This idea has been in my mind for a while now. I thought that I would at least put out what I had thought out. Hopefully I come up with more soon.
Sure ENPUGH.
were growing larger by the SEOND.
Feathers began to GRW
Loving the story so far! Just wanted to point out some little typos that i've seen ;P. Btw, would really appreciate if you didn't use too much that old english thing :S
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Fix'd
I'm very excited to see where this goes
9762828
It'll happen... eventually .
I thought something was off from the start. I was right. There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes. Only way to improve, though, is to fix those, at least, at the moment.
Wouldn't bluebelle be more surprised at the fact she became an alicorn? Also i found some spelling errors
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I tried to fix as many errors as I could find. Thanks for pointing that out.
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Your welcome. Blood guard is an interesting name for bluebelles guards
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Now to wait for the next part of the story.
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It's going to happen... Eventually.
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I hope blueblood gets retrbution for this.
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We'll see.
Bluebelle better hope Rarity isn't in the mood for a beat down. A verbal beatdown.
You do realize that there are washing machines in ponyville right?
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Are you sure?
https://cheezburger.com/5890622208
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Yes they do. They showed them in the episode where Applejack and rarity go to the ponyville day spa
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My mistake. I never saw that one. Pardon me a moment...
9790178
Fixed. I'll have to watch that episode at some point.
Luna sure is old fashion I mean who’s to say you princess can’t wear a suit and tie ?
9802428
Luna is a mare out of her time, remember. Of course she'd be a trifle old fashioned.
When will this story be updated
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When I get a flash of inspiration. My creativity comes in fits and starts,
At least this Bluebelle sounds better than Spoil could ever be.
There's a spelling error
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Thank you. Fix'd.
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Did you ever see that episode?
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Not before you mentioned it.
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So is that a yes?
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I've seen it now, yes.
I also watched DWK's Totally Legit Recap on it. I can't BELIEVE I missed that too.
Why is there
for ?
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Huh? Where?
ITS ALIVE
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Sudden flash of inspiration; Let's see where it leads!
irresponsible and Perspective.
my.
the only mistakes I could spot, other than that great chapter.