This is one of the most intense military action stories I've ever read on this site, and it is AWESOME!!!

Please let the humans and ponies stand as equals in this one -- and fuck the 'Overlord' who said the humans couldn't retreat!

If you want this story to have a better chance of being noticed I'd recommend adding it to a group.
Humans Are Superior
And
Technology Is Magic
Is what I recommend trying. Xd

9689674
Thanks for the suggestion!
It is my intention to begin adding this story once I have finished writing (in my files) so that it will at least be in the editing phase before a wider audience looks at it. I really don't want it to be put in a group only for my motivation for this story to vanish (because that's just how it is sometimes). I don't like seeing stories that remain in incomplete hell, so before I really try to put feelers out there, I'm going to make sure it has a written ending (besides the notes I put in my storyboards)

Glad you like the story so far though, always good to know somebody has an interest!

9690612
Your welcome!

9689674
No, the humans aren't superior. Here, they are equals.

Standard combat loadouts will not suffice in this instance.

3-6 mags is not enough here