The story's good and I want to read more of it. The only glaring problem I see is the need of an author. Both chapter 1 and 2 need a good deal of clean up with grammatical errors and wrong words along with extra words breaking the flow. With the help of an editor though, the flow will be as that of a peaceful river. Good luck on this! Looking forward to seeing more.
84 words. Hope you expand on this chapter. It is an excellent start.
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Right I hope so too
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I got to ask..But heck was chapter 2? Did you forget to add the rest?
Sorry, have to ask is it a teaser or something?
I feel bad for poor Anon, being violated and raped like that.
The story's good and I want to read more of it. The only glaring problem I see is the need of an author. Both chapter 1 and 2 need a good deal of clean up with grammatical errors and wrong words along with extra words breaking the flow. With the help of an editor though, the flow will be as that of a peaceful river. Good luck on this! Looking forward to seeing more.
Can't wait to see more. Keep going.
Is the story dead?
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Another chapter is up.