1152984GOOD JOB! and ik, my editor is taking entrance exams this week so alot of my stuff isn't going to be fixed for a while.....but thnkz i hope it goes well....and i have never seen Chernobyl Diaries, i heard it sucked, and this is going to be a good bit different
1153022 don't worry...no one can resist the urge , and just a general heads up...there will be a good amount of switching between the main story, Fluttershy's story and testimony of the accident for at least the first few chapters, but when the flashbacks end, the main story will continue alone, but just wait...zombified Fluttershy to come
Pretty good story so far, I do see a few errors here and there, but that can be overlooked. Also:
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1152984 GOOD JOB! and ik, my editor is taking entrance exams this week so alot of my stuff isn't going to be fixed for a while.....but thnkz i hope it goes well....and i have never seen Chernobyl Diaries, i heard it sucked, and this is going to be a good bit different
Sorry, I just couldn't resist the urge but yeah, neither have I, just hope this goes somewhere well
1153022 don't worry...no one can resist the urge , and just a general heads up...there will be a good amount of switching between the main story, Fluttershy's story and testimony of the accident for at least the first few chapters, but when the flashbacks end, the main story will continue alone, but just wait...zombified Fluttershy to come
Interesting, Please continue.
1153056 will do!
Oh my, this looks extremely promising, besides remembering to capitalize your "I"s, everything is effing amazing
1153395 thanks...but this is me after being up for 40 hours straight, no editor and coffee supplies running low
1153410 Duly noted , hope this continues to be as awesome as it's started out
oh it shall....it shall
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