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I don't know how this hadn't gotten featured?!
It's an amazing story almost the likes of the original and it needs more views!
I'll help how I can.
Also, you need an editor and to work on personal pronouns.
"He, she, I, they, them" you either mix them up or default everypone to "they" and "their".
Something a good editor would catch.
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Thank you! I'm beyond happy to hear that you are enjoying the story so far.
As for editors, I try my best to catch all the mistakes, but I'm well aware that I do miss a good chunk of them, especially in some of the earlier chapters. Once the story has reached its conclusion, I intend to do a large sweep of the whole story to try and remove as many missed mistakes as possible, hopefully with the assistance of some editors. I will definitely keep personal pronouns in mind for my writings going forward and for my future revisions. Thank you.