Up until the last few paragraphs where Fluff asked for a Cutie Staff and Cutie Vault, I thought she was Twilight and not Starlight. I thought the author just got the colors just a little wrong. Goes to show just how bad Glimmy's character design is.

Technically, this is not second-person narration. Second-person refers to books that describe the thoughts and actions of the protagonist as though they were the reader's own. Beginning everything with "you" is a dead giveaway, a lot of choose-your-own-adventure books use this style.

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Thank you for that. Sometimes I get things a little mixed up! I'll fix it!

this has a ton of potential. definitely going to keep an eye on this

So this is before season 5 then.