“And that is why you shouldn’t ask out a filly in the Spring,” Granny continued. “Because fillies are stupid, colts are stupider, and there ain’t any money!”
You can't fight wild, animalistic desire love with reason and logic, Granny
I wouldn't be bothered by the comparably low amount of votes and views your story got, if I were you. The incest clopfic market is simply over-saturated at this point due to the recent contest.
I would have enjoyed the clop part more if the two were more awkward and less skilled at pleasuring each other, seeing as it seemed to be their first sexual experience and AJ already managed to deep-throat her brother without much difficulty.
That said, I enjoyed the story overall, and will be looking forward to more chapters. Liked and tracked
You can't fight
wild, animalistic desirelove with reason and logic, GrannyI wouldn't be bothered by the comparably low amount of votes and views your story got, if I were you. The incest clopfic market is simply over-saturated at this point due to the recent contest.
I would have enjoyed the clop part more if the two were more awkward and less skilled at pleasuring each other, seeing as it seemed to be their first sexual experience and AJ already managed to deep-throat her brother without much difficulty.
That said, I enjoyed the story overall, and will be looking forward to more chapters. Liked and tracked
cant wait to read more