To tell the truth, she was A breath taking!

The hand shake was gentle, but Sparkling could feel the rough hands of someone who’d worked at physical labor all her life. Also she could tell that this hand could have CRUSH hers, literally, if so inclined. Such was the strength that was hinted. Sparkling was having trouble remembering why she was here. Such was the attraction and yes, arousal she was feeling.

When Ivory told a funny story, Sparkling laughed hard. She put her hand out to steady herself and IN landed on Ivory’s. To her delight, Ivory didn’t pull back but actually took her hand and held it.

Only a few tiny mistakes that I noticed. I am really liking this so far and I'm not much of a Rarijack fan, but I look forward to seeing what happens next. Found a bit of time between loads to start reading. Expect at least two more chapters to have comments!

Ambrosia