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Stormbringer


I write romance with intimacies, not clop. To my readers, I quote The Bard: “We who prologue-like your humble patience pray, Gently to hear, kindly to judge, our play.” (Henry V)

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From one writer to another. I don't know your schedule or your plan. But to maximize the reading experience, it helps to space out chapters between posting. Just some advice.

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Thanks for that, but I have always waited until it was complete. So many times I have followed a story, chapter by chapter only to have the writer go on hiatus or worse, abandon the story.

But hey, thanks for caring enough to comment. I do hope you enjoy the work.

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Your point is exceedingly valid. And I plan to. Thanks :)

Quick note, haha, 300th watcher. #Spartan

great story and I like this virosn of the main 6, it reminds me of another story but where rairy and twilight personality were switch, rairy was the smart one while twilight was more of a showmare,

To tell the truth, she was A breath taking!

The hand shake was gentle, but Sparkling could feel the rough hands of someone who’d worked at physical labor all her life. Also she could tell that this hand could have CRUSH hers, literally, if so inclined. Such was the strength that was hinted. Sparkling was having trouble remembering why she was here. Such was the attraction and yes, arousal she was feeling.

When Ivory told a funny story, Sparkling laughed hard. She put her hand out to steady herself and IN landed on Ivory’s. To her delight, Ivory didn’t pull back but actually took her hand and held it.

Only a few tiny mistakes that I noticed. I am really liking this so far and I'm not much of a Rarijack fan, but I look forward to seeing what happens next. Found a bit of time between loads to start reading. Expect at least two more chapters to have comments!

Ambrosia

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Thanks friend. That kind of corrections are welcome.

Love it! I'm surprised that the pace is much more subdued than most of what you write. Seems more detailed as well. This is getting juicy. ONWARD!!!!

Things got hot to trot if you catch my drift. Oh, I have feeling that shenanigans are a-hoof.

I called it! Shenanigans! I'm sucked in. Can't stop reading. I'm really liking this a lot.

Oh, I am so looking forward to Plume's reaction to this. I absolutely adore this story.

If this doesn't turn into a love triangle and Ivory and Sparkling don't come out I'll be slightly disappointed.

Oh, I really hope there is more to come of this. Sequel, side story! I always look forward to your writing. This was fantastic.

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Thank you so much for your kind words. I know you are busy, but if you could look at some of my other new works, I would really like that. Hope you and yours are doing well...

Storm

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I think I slowed down while writing my latest book. A 300 + page 77,000 word 'Erotic Romance'
Three Women, One Heart Yes it under another Pen Name. Not like my first book. :raritywink:

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Not to worry, I am working on getting to those. I will have some time tomorrow night, pretty much all day Saturday and most of Sunday since the port in Baltimore is closed on the weekend.

i like these type of story wehre the mane 6 personality have been alter in some way but the element are same,

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Thanks. Your insight is always valued, my friend.

I have yet to read this, but I remember this tumblr. It's one of the AU I have enjoyed the most. I am glad I'm not the only one. Now to read...

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I did get permission to use this world. I am glad of it and am working on a second.

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