What the hell Celestia?! Seriously!!

Will this story have NGE's infamous ending?

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I'm afraid I can't spoil that. Besides, I hardly doubt that's the direction Rebuild is going since Lilith is dead in 3.0 by blowing up. People didn't turn into LCL that time. My story might end in a happy ending or it might end in a sad but sweet ending. I honestly haven't decided how to end it.

This story also contains some disturbing scenes like domestic violence and psychological horror. Some scenes are sexual but there is NO porn

Interesting. Sounds like there might be a scene that is a recreation or homage to the "mind rape" scene (you know the one). Suppose I can give it a read when I have the time.

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I know what you are talking about. Yeah, it's a bit like that. I don't write horror stories all that much but I'll try my best to boggle your mind. I hope yah don't mind the spelling errors. I'll try to get them fixed soon.

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As long as they're not too egregious, I think I can handle a few spelling errors.

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Let me know if it is.

Sunset’s loads nicer to Shinji compared to uh, Asuka.

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Yeah, but things would be deferent if they met during the days Sunset was bad.

9677394 True.

I would suggest you to comb the new chapter for minor grammar mistakes.

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The edited version is done. Just have to post it.

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Sorry for the late reply.

Understood.

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That's okay

"A puppy?" asked Fluttershy.

"A wild fluttershy has appeared"

After that Shinji was playing another game called twister with Sunset and the girls. He wasn't very familiar with the game and its rules but it wasn't hard to understand them when Sunset and the others showed him step by step. "Okay, Shinji, now right-hand yellow," said Pinkie Pie.

This gives me Bad memories of diaries of a madman

I mean, celestia has to do her job, But getting expelled for an Accident?!?!
so Gilda what , HUH?