Mark Libenson wasn't a very social man. Living almost the entirety of his life alone with as little interaction with other people as possible. For him, Quest Online is his true home.
Your earlier chapters were really well done they had good details nice story building nice world building some James things said about the future you know good foreshadowing And I’m assuming the later chapters your writing style has changed a bit it seems like you’re trying to push chapters are quicker or the stories being a bit more rushed but it’s still nice and a decent pace as well I’ll keep my eye out on the story
9727178 Thank you for the input, I have been having issues with getting up the will to do any writing for a while now due to some life events that have really just killed my enthusiasm in general. I have been working through them and trying to improve it so that the same tone can be carried throughout. I'm not sure which James you are referencing, but I know that there is always room for improvement.
Celestia calmly walked up to stand next to him. The mane Six looked at each other before nodding and joining her. “Alright, here we go.” Taking his staff in hand, Makarova began to speak, “Because we are only doing PVE, we shouldn’t need to worry about things like false life info or teleportation delay or redirection. So I will just go with the basic boosts for now and see what comes up later.” Closing his eyes, he began to cast. {Lion’s heart}{Greater Magic Sheild}{Greater Ability Boost}{Luck Boost}{Greater Protection Negative Engery}{Greater Protection Evil}{Greater Agility Boost}{Greater Health Boost}. As each spell was announced, a different shade of light draped over the group. Whispers had started up once they came out of the guildhall, but they were once again silenced as he rambled off the various buff spells.
Damn you cliffhangers!!!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
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Never forget to prep. Those that do end up dying more often then those that do not. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Your earlier chapters were really well done they had good details nice story building nice world building some James things said about the future you know good foreshadowing And I’m assuming the later chapters your writing style has changed a bit it seems like you’re trying to push chapters are quicker or the stories being a bit more rushed but it’s still nice and a decent pace as well I’ll keep my eye out on the story
9727178
Thank you for the input, I have been having issues with getting up the will to do any writing for a while now due to some life events that have really just killed my enthusiasm in general. I have been working through them and trying to improve it so that the same tone can be carried throughout. I'm not sure which James you are referencing, but I know that there is always room for improvement.
YUS
Well, it were nice so far and I really like your world building. I hope you have a plan, though.
Why does this remind me of overlord?
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Because you got the reference. Lolz
Oh look, another Doctor Who reference.
At least it's the Tenth one, thank the Nine... ;]
Please tell me you intend to produce more, Author. Things are starting to seem fun!
say,you gonna update any time soon![:scootangel:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/scootangel.png)
Sunny approves of OP wizards.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
ENCORE!!!!! ENCORE!!!!!
Yoyo to jo keep it up
Hhmmm.... I LOVE IT ANOTHER
Update when? PLZ
*knock,knock,knock* hello, you gonna update soon![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)