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heyo

Story is interesting. But...
Advice: read Fallout Equestria (all chapters). After that, write next chapters
Explanation: Fallout Equestria storyline is complex and important

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Oh no doubt, I had to read 20 chapters, extensively read the wiki, and ask a lot of questions in the fallout equestria discord just to feel comfortable writing this chapter. The Foe universe is a beast!

Great chapter can't wait for more

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Chapter 2's coming, I got some finals for school I need to work on first, but I should get cracking on it next week

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Sweet can't wait

Finally got around to reading this! Had the tab open for months, but kept forgetting to read it. Glad I did, because now I’m excited to see more!

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Good timing because I'm gearing up to start writing some more of this project! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it; what was your favorite part so far?

I have updated chapter 1, fixed a bunch of editing and spelling mistakes

Enjoying the characters so far.

Are you a fellow shango066 viewer by any chance?

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I am not but I am now, this channel is awesome!