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Story is interesting. But...
Advice: read Fallout Equestria (all chapters). After that, write next chapters
Explanation: Fallout Equestria storyline is complex and important

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Oh no doubt, I had to read 20 chapters, extensively read the wiki, and ask a lot of questions in the fallout equestria discord just to feel comfortable writing this chapter. The Foe universe is a beast! :twilightsheepish:

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Chapter 2's coming, I got some finals for school I need to work on first, but I should get cracking on it next week :twilightsmile:

Finally got around to reading this! Had the tab open for months, but kept forgetting to read it. Glad I did, because now I’m excited to see more!

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Good timing because I'm gearing up to start writing some more of this project! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it; what was your favorite part so far? :pinkiehappy:

I have updated chapter 1, fixed a bunch of editing and spelling mistakes

It feels a bit like you set her up to become a Part of Big MT with her Mental Stability and all. :D

(Do you already know when you will have the next Chapter ready?)

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I just finished the draft for chapter 3 I got to start refining it, I want to get some work done on it this weekend

Also I haven't explored old world blues yet, what is the big MT about? Or should I go fire up New Vegas and play it? :twilightsheepish:

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When you play it for the first time you will likely overlook a good deal of it, so a few Lore Videos should do the Trick.

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLX3Sax_xs4WQc49EPSTyK4T4duqrAWDad

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I'm gonna watch all of these! Stay tune for the next chapter, it's coming shortly (follow, follow! :pinkiehappy: )

Comment posted by Starlight Nova deleted Aug 30th, 2022
Comment posted by Rainb0w Dashie deleted Aug 30th, 2022

Enjoying the characters so far.

Are you a fellow shango066 viewer by any chance? :rainbowlaugh:

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I am not but I am now, this channel is awesome!

Is everything okay, Rainb0w Dashie? It has been more than half a year since we last heard of your awesome story.

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Everything ok? Nah, but we groovin,

You really think my story is awesome? :pinkiegasp:

That means a lot, You know, I do have chapter 3 sitting around in the back of my head somewhere, I can start working on it, I've been wanting to get back into writing again :pinkiehappy:

Wouldn't it make more sense to put the character profiles at the end of the story or make blog posts about them and link to them in the synopsis?

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I dunno, I'm just trying to do something flashy, thinking like it's the beginning of the story, why not a short character profile?

Maybe have it before chapter 1?

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I was trying to balance out her high perception, luck, and moderately high intelligence, everything else took a huge hit D:

EDIT: I might balance it out and make her low skills 2 across the board

Didn’t think I’d see an update to this, keep it up!

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