What would you do to protect what you love. Push others into harms way or even become like the monsters you swore to fight. Twilights journey will find if she can keep human enough to survive.
Twilight getting hurt feels good here. Helps break up her previous god like power into still being human and not being able to do it all. So now, we get to see what the Top Student can actually do when she lets loose instead of just having Twilight wave her hand and solve the problem... well I hope at least.
In other story news. The fights feel short, but realistically that may work to show how much they've grown which is pretty solid writing. None of them win against opponents they've been outclassed by before too handily (Pinkie and RD have to run like hell and Spike gets decently hurt) but at the same time they do manage to put the fights away relatively cleanly. The small shortcomings just go to show that they still have room to improve even at these levels. It's good, like really good.
9909636 Thank you for the kind words! Like I had said months ago before disappearing Twilight had been pushing herself to show how strong she was while Tempest had already set herself as a top student. Also most fights in real life last only a few minutes, rarely longer so wanted to keep more authentic till we moved into more extreme fights. Next chapter will really show the scale of Tempest to Twilight.
LUKA NO!!!
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Who's Luka?
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https://youtu.be/70SW0RpOKWk
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Well that was certainly different but now I understand haha.
Great story so far can't wait to read more whenever it comes out
Yay a new chapter
Twilight getting hurt feels good here. Helps break up her previous god like power into still being human and not being able to do it all. So now, we get to see what the Top Student can actually do when she lets loose instead of just having Twilight wave her hand and solve the problem... well I hope at least.
In other story news. The fights feel short, but realistically that may work to show how much they've grown which is pretty solid writing. None of them win against opponents they've been outclassed by before too handily (Pinkie and RD have to run like hell and Spike gets decently hurt) but at the same time they do manage to put the fights away relatively cleanly. The small shortcomings just go to show that they still have room to improve even at these levels. It's good, like really good.
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Thank you for the kind words! Like I had said months ago before disappearing Twilight had been pushing herself to show how strong she was while Tempest had already set herself as a top student. Also most fights in real life last only a few minutes, rarely longer so wanted to keep more authentic till we moved into more extreme fights. Next chapter will really show the scale of Tempest to Twilight.
Well...we went from ‘catching interest’ via Twi vs Blueblood to ‘getting very interesting’.
Your story makes me having to remind myself to stop comparing the students (Harmony included) to my OC, who I must admit is...well...beyond OP.