20 years of war...blood spilling, limp flying,flesh burning...war...then... I end up in a less 'violent' world... what the fuck have i gotten myself into?
If there is any thing that needs fixing such as spelling or grammar let me know.
‘Step 1: Give the readers a reference to world and lore.’
‘Step 2: Learn to make any sense, a location would be nice to drop by chapter 4.’
‘Step 3: Making sense. Nothing is established beside what the story titel and story cover give us so far...’
‘Step 4: Establishment of characters, the best this story has are names. Bearly ANY descriptions at all.’
‘Step 5: Abilities or equicment of the main or side characters. Who are the not described people around the main character. Why are they evil?.’
‘Step 6: This story made no sense so far, its characters made no sense, what is even happening?.’
What are the huges numbers about?
If there is any thing that needs fixing such as spelling or grammar let me know.
‘Step 1: Give the readers a reference to world and lore.’
‘Step 2: Learn to make any sense, a location would be nice to drop by chapter 4.’
‘Step 3: Making sense.
Nothing is established beside what the story titel and story cover give us so far...’
‘Step 4: Establishment of characters, the best this story has are names. Bearly ANY descriptions at all.’
‘Step 5: Abilities or equicment of the main or side characters. Who are the not described people around the main character. Why are they evil?.’
‘Step 6: This story made no sense so far, its characters made no sense, what is even happening?.’
What are the huges numbers about?