20 years of war...blood spilling, limp flying,flesh burning...war...then... I end up in a less 'violent' world... what the fuck have i gotten myself into?
This story keeps every frame from recognition. If I didn't know this has a mlp connection I would literally have nothing to go on. This seem to be like stuff taken out of the middle of a story without any context. I know it has a connection to 'X-Com' due to the name of the story and the picture, also since we are on Fimfiction it has something to do with 'My Little Pony', but otherwise this made no sense at all.
If not for the comment section I read before I would not continue to read. Hope this story to be more than a string of words without meaning or direction.
This story keeps every frame from recognition.
If I didn't know this has a mlp connection I would literally have nothing to go on.
This seem to be like stuff taken out of the middle of a story without any context.
I know it has a connection to 'X-Com' due to the name of the story and the picture, also since we are on Fimfiction it has something to do with 'My Little Pony', but otherwise this made no sense at all.
If not for the comment section I read before I would not continue to read.
Hope this story to be more than a string of words without meaning or direction.