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Angel of Anarchy
Welcome I am an incarnation of anarchy as my name suggests I bring death and destruction but only to keep balance of the universe.
Angel of Anarchy
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Just read the three new chapters you made, and god I gotta say I love this story and what you did so far, like viper, I Really love how you did her and all, and I really want to see our human and viper get closer now, please keep up the good work buddy
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Thanks for the input I'm on chapter 8 now.
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Your welcome, oh and this is gonna be fun
It's fine, but please don't forget this story, also great work on this chapter, please keep it up bud
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Well i didn't Say i would forget it...just the way i have things set up...
You see i have at least 6 stories in play...3 of which i have on computer and 2 with paper.
The one i got into was on paper and converting that to word bit by bit takes time its long at times and short on others.
So when i get burnt on one story i work on another sounds tiring but it really isn't when you go at your own pace...plus i plan to add the beginning of the second story soon I'm almost done with the prologue, and its LOOONG
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Okay, thanks for explaining
This was lovely, happy things turned well for the Colt and his Grandpa, along with Our two aliens, I look forward to more of this bud
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More is to come.
Be ready for some intersting interactions soon.
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Yay
I'm loving this history, good work! This go to my favorite list for sure.
I will be waiting for the next chapter and more to come!
Pd: sorry for my grammar, I'm not a use to writing in English
I love this story and I cant wait for more.So keep it up and stay safe out there👍
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born in America and even i cant speak or type English either. XD
So, when does this take place in a regular XCOM campaign playthrough?
And when does our op human badass meets the mane six and the princesses?
And I have a feeling that he will see Tempest again, and would hopefully reform her. And to finish off the Storm King once and for all.
Strange to read a story starting seemingly mid-campain, let's see where this leads to.
Can't make heads or tails out of the story yet.
Neither the main character or the world around it.
Can't even tell if this is a Antro story or not.
Are they inside Equestria or outside it.
What is the deal with the huge numbers?
This story keeps every frame from recognition.
If I didn't know this has a mlp connection I would literally have nothing to go on.
This seem to be like stuff taken out of the middle of a story without any context.
I know it has a connection to 'X-Com' due to the name of the story and the picture, also since we are on Fimfiction it has something to do with 'My Little Pony', but otherwise this made no sense at all.
If not for the comment section I read before I would not continue to read.
Hope this story to be more than a string of words without meaning or direction.
It has not even started to make a lick of sense, no context besides the story titel and the website it is published on.
I guess this Psi op is X-Com 1 gen soldier? Not mentioned by the way in anyway, how did he recovered from a critical state otherwise?
How is the food or water situation of him?
What is he wearing? Has he anything but a knife and clothing on him?
Where are they?
Inside Equestria or outside it?
This is a antro story or not? How did this story got through moderation?
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Author's Note:
This chapter is cut short to make it easy.
Me: What the fuck? I don't see any head or tails to the story, is there any goal to this?
Making any kind of sense would be nice.
Where do his abilitiescome from? It doesn't come from the games. Where is the none mentioned lore coming from?
‘Step 1: Give the readers a reference to world and lore.’
‘Step 2: Learn to make any sense, a location would be nice to drop by chapter 4.’
‘Step 3: Making sense.
Nothing is established beside what the story titel and story cover give us so far...’
‘Step 4: Establishment of characters, the best this story has are names. Bearly ANY descriptions at all.’
‘Step 5: Abilities or equicment of the main or side characters. Who are the not described people around the main character. Why are they evil?.’
‘Step 6: This story made no sense so far, its characters made no sense, what is even happening?.’
What are the huges numbers about?
This story is a waste of time. Still nothing is really established.
In over 10 years on this site as a reader i never read a story that made less sense.
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