Spike's molt causes him to slide into a psychotic rage that is normal for dragons but probably unappealing to all the ponies and other things he rapes and murders and then rapes again because of it.
Somehow being too stupid to know that being plowed should break her concentration resulted in Twilight not having to worry about it.
Basic telekinesis is clearly easy enough to do mid-coitus because that would let unicorns make up for their relatively poor stamina by adding more stimulation. Either that, or the telekinesis is the first sign Twilight's mentioned healing factor is working against her "permanent" retardation and we'll need regular booster shots to keep her pliant. And of course raping her every time it happens as punishment for trying to be a worse fucktoy.
When her tailhole gave way, it felt like a thick splintered tree branch opening her up.
It sounds like Mudbriar is canon to this story. Normally I disapprove of his existence, but making him an even worse pony is probably fine.
11010429 It might be the extremely non-serious tone for a great deal of it. I think as it has gone on, characters having casual conversations during horrifying acts is becoming more common.
11010407 I usually ignore Mudbriar's existence. I think the only time I mention him is in my upcoming Fallout Equestria fic where he was killed off-screen in a dragon attack during the early war.
11011246 I don't know why he suffered for Rarity so long when he had a cute nerdy girl right there he could have came on to. It's an objective fact that nerdy girls are better in bed than fashion divas.
11011296 It was definitely different. I don't think I'd ever written about someone being brought back as a zombie sex slave. Which reminds me, I technically should add 'necrophilia' to the contents for any chapter where Rarity has sex now.
Basic telekinesis is clearly easy enough to do mid-coitus because that would let unicorns make up for their relatively poor stamina by adding more stimulation. Either that, or the telekinesis is the first sign Twilight's mentioned healing factor is working against her "permanent" retardation and we'll need regular booster shots to keep her pliant. And of course raping her every time it happens as punishment for trying to be a worse fucktoy.
It sounds like Mudbriar is canon to this story. Normally I disapprove of his existence, but making him an even worse pony is probably fine.
I feel incredibly indifferent to this story like nothing in it gets a reaction from me but normally i'm disgusted by gore like this.
Nice chapter.
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no u
11010429
It might be the extremely non-serious tone for a great deal of it. I think as it has gone on, characters having casual conversations during horrifying acts is becoming more common.
11010407
I usually ignore Mudbriar's existence. I think the only time I mention him is in my upcoming Fallout Equestria fic where he was killed off-screen in a dragon attack during the early war.
11011246
I don't know why he suffered for Rarity so long when he had a cute nerdy girl right there he could have came on to. It's an objective fact that nerdy girls are better in bed than fashion divas.
11011296
It was definitely different. I don't think I'd ever written about someone being brought back as a zombie sex slave.
Which reminds me, I technically should add 'necrophilia' to the contents for any chapter where Rarity has sex now.
Ok I love brain-fried Twilight
11014293
That makes sense!