Get to Convention start talking to a shopkeep, get sent to world that is like Dark Souls, acts like Corruption of Champions, and had ponies. I'm now on a quest to save the world from Corruption!
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Really good first chapter. I wish there were more Dark Souls crossovers.
Not bad
Not bad...but I am seeing the same problem Inferno has with his stories. A lack of descriptions and detail. Explanations would be good too, and Willow was simply not questioning things enough nor explaining things to the level I would have expected and honestly think should've, especially with her situation. In fact, she barely explained at all. She basically took what was explained to her, and then left, at least in this chapter. I'd recommend editing this again and adding her actual explanation, especially since it was prime time to have Willow explain it here, even if it would've been early in the minds of other readers.