• Published 31st Oct 2018
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It Bleeds No More - Equimorto

It was supposed to be just a simple experiment. One that could potentially revolutionize their world if it went right, but not a particularly dangerous one. Everything should have gone smoothly. It wasn't supposed to go like it did. It wasn't.

It Bleeds No More written by Equimorto
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Comment posted by Finn 4578 deleted Nov 1st, 2018
JazzyWaffles
JazzyWaffles #2 · Nov 1st, 2018 · · ·
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Twi light slowly opened her eyes and adjusted to the dim light in the room. She tried to get up, but found her hooves were restrained, and something was preventing her from using her magic. From her position, lying on her back on a cold surface, she could only see a portion of the ceiling. " Star light?" she called.

why are they italicized why are they italicized why are they italicized WHY ARE THEY ITALICIZED

Twilight screamed

Ohgodohgodohgodohgod
nononononononononono

Moosetasm
Moosetasm #3 · Jan 30th, 2019 · · ·
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It hurts. It shouldn't hurt like this. Hard seeing things.

Oh. Oh no. And the end of the chapter... the earliest I noticed the name swaps was at the beginning of the journal, Twilight.

Comment posted by LeylaQuartz deleted Sep 19th, 2021
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