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Aw.
This was pretty nice, I liked it.
Good job.
Wait...has this story been Anthro the entire time? The lack of the Anthro tag made me believe otherwise.
At first I couldn’t find it then I did, and now I wonder what would the others reaction be when they find out
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When I say, "anthropomorphic," I mean it in the old sense that it's animals with human personalities and traits, not "anthro" as in animals turned into humans.
9307847
Thanks, I was a little uncertain of it to be honest.
9308086
...are they bipedal or quadrupedal? Because If they are quadrupedal, I'm pretty sure anthropormorphic doesn't apply here. "Anthro" usually implies bipedal.
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Quadrupedal. The rabbits from Watership Down and the pigs from Animal Farm are classified as anthropomorphic despite not walking on hindlegs or doing human things. "Anthropomorphism" just means bestowing human traits on something non-human like animals, inanimate objects or concepts like the seasons. It can range from intelligence and speech to yes, physiology and culture.
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Ok, I was just confused because usually "anthropotmorphic" on this site means the bipedal with hands, and I think it was in this story that referred to the ponies' forelegs as "arms", which further confused me. I had assumed quadrupedal, but then you said anthro in this chapter, and well...
9308129
Well, okay that's fair. I started using "forelegs" in reference to arms, which is a pain as I have to keep reminding myself to not use "arms" when I'm writing.
I've read stories with the same amount of "expressiveness" and maintain their T rating.
now i wonder if honeysuckle ended up pregnant because of that I mean I doubt it but still I wonder
9335485
Huh, you know, that's a very good question. I wonder...?
9310789
Seriously?
Damn.
9849257
Well maybe not as much as this does but still quite a bit.
You probably won’t see this but I’m at the point where I don’t care. Unpopular opinion, especially with fanfictions and fanfic writers, but this story is bad. I love sombra as a character, well most of the villains can be good characters given enough investment in to their own lore, but out of all villains, sombra is the most versatile of all the villains. We hardly see him on screen, we don’t truest know his motives and the few times were he appeared in the comics, he was the good guy turned bad guy with a very ambiguous end. So any fic with sombra is a must read for me. That being said, this feels like a rushed attempt at a script that some super ultra virgin that wants to self insert as sombra wrote in the wee hours before he goes wanks for the 4 time that day. The story, plot, execution, relationship, and the characterization are all flawed terribly. I usually can just shut up and read something, find out it’s trash and move on but this... the only thing that’s kept me going was the twibra element (which in itself is... rushed). But I’ve hit a point where not even that can stop me from quitting on this. And again, I can usually move on in peace but for some reason, my brain tells me I have to let you know just how cringe this is.
Have a good day.
10447984
Well, this was the second story that I ever put on the site and I was still learning at the time. I am well-aware of the fact that it's not particularly good but to be fair, at least I tried. There are far worse stuff on here. Your criticism, while well-thought out with some genuinely good points, is also rude and blatantly disrespectful in its execution. I can handle criticism but petty insults are downright intolerable.
10447984
That's just downright insulting mr/ms Fireflame159. If you want to comment, then at least write some constructive criticism.