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You should be glad that you didn't get sliced to pieces, Rainbow Dash. Plus her Vectors are much faster than you can hope to achieve.
She is the Last thing you want to provoke, threaten or make enemies with.
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She’s also a walking tank. And near impossible to kill.
Interesting premise. Looking forward to future chapters!
the vectors are so useful.
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Indeed.
Hey, grat chapter. Don't worry about the lenght, i for one, like them large, like 5-10k words each.
A bit of advice if you will. When writing dialogs, make them separete from each party talking. For example, Twilight is talking with Applejack, you just have to take turns for each one, saying a line, doing an action or thinking etc.
I hope this helps you to improve a bit.
Didn't Vectors infect everyone they touct so they can only have diclonius children? You touched at least half of mane 6 already!
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Maybe the magic in their body protects them.
they're
I realize I'm a wee bit (years) late, but something about this chapter bothers me greatly.
If you're thinking of the blue box from Doctor Who, then it would be Tardis, which stands for Time And Relative Dimension In Space.
That is all.