A lowly servant, a simple pawn, a means to an end, a reluctant daughter, but above all else... a capable student. When it comes to magic, Twilight Sparkle is always ready to learn, and Grogar is more than happy to teach the filly everything he knows.
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This is honestly fascinating. Yes, Grogar is clearly malicious, but he's also strangely fatherly to Twilight.
Another great character but I did notice some mistakes
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What kind of mistakes?
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Ah, that's not a grammatical error. The composition is correct, if uncommon.
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So capitalizing the I in simple is common?
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Nope, that I didn't see.
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I'm glad to have pointed it out to you
Very nice, hope Twilight remembers to ask Grogar about the disappearance of ambient mana in Equestria.
This needs more likes. I love it.
I see three possibilities
1) A lot of said ambient mana got sucked into pocket worlds like Grogar's and will return when the spells break like it did with the crystal empire.
2) Celestia herself traped a lot of the mana in items like the elements so that less ponies would have the "terribly powerful" spells.
3) Starswir's experiments into other worlds kept letting the magic out of there world. That time with the sirens probably let out a fair amount and as far as we know the mirror portals are constantly letting the magic out.
oh and a side note about number two, I saw a video titled "Sky High: Disney's Fascist Eugenics Movie" it describes how the movie is about the ideal fascist utopia and I feel like there is a disturbing amount of similarities to the alicorns rule. Please Check it out and comment on whether you agree.
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I think that would be the case if the show focused more on something like unicorn or alicorn superiority, but that doesn't seem, to me at least, to be case here. I think a case could be argued for fascism when it comes to the alicorn's rule but as far as eugenics is concern? I'm not really seeing it. There was the whole thing with Chancellor Neighsay, but that was more general racism than anything.
This is, of course, me talking about the actual show and canon. With fanfiction, anything goes. Maybe there are some examples of eugenics at play, but I can't think of any off the top of my head.
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Well, I just meant the fascism part and how alicorns came to power becouse they are just so much stronger than everyone else. I wasn't talking about eugenics, Though they still have nobles which are by definition obsessed with bloodlines and breeding, plus twilight seemed to just be born better than everyone else with her crazy magic explosion when she was young.
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True on both accounts, but the whole thing with Twilight being a super powerful magic user, the show seems to have downplayed that quite a bit in recent seasons, especially now that Starlight has been thrown into the mix. I mean, she single-handedly (hoofedly?) straight up murdered Discord. Yeah, they say he was fine in the show, but if you saw that episode, it was very clear that Starlight kamehameha'd Discord to death. She also took out a bugbear on her own, something that Twilight and the others struggled to do together. There's also the self levitation thing and I can't remember too well, but I think she actually brought Discord back to life at the end of that episode.
So yeah, for some reason in canon, it seems the mantle of most powerful pony other than Celestia or Luna has been passed to Starlight, and Twilight's kinda been thrown to the wayside for the most part. I'm not happy about it, but it is what it is, I guess.
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I agree Starlight is insane, she claimed to just "banish" discord so I doubt that she really killed him, but that blast of power was so intense that I feel like she was trying. Wait, she was able to banish discord... the princesses weren't able to do that without the elements... is she stronger than both of the immortal rulers combined? One final thing both of the supposedly strongest ponies ever were purple unicorns... I guess the master race is purple, who knew.
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She just banished him from a school, sort of like a bigger version of how Celestia stopped him from affecting the Elements of Harmony with his magic.
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It could be a combination of all three.