A troubled engineer to a corrupt chapter of the Steel Rangers finds things out about his past, and while trying to fix prior mistakes and make things right for the wasteland, tries to discover the truth about his own, fleeting self.
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I prefer shorter chapters. Please respond to this comment.
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I'm sorry, but I can't cater to everyone's wants. A good story is often times one with immersive detail and length. I won't be making 1,000 word chapters. That's not chapter length in my eyes. That's a sorry excuse of writing, when it comes to writing full length books. Short stories, it's absolutely fine. This is not a short story.
On another note, have you read the other Fallout Equestria books? The original? Project Horizons? Their chapters are much longer than the ones I write. There is a chapter in Kkat's Fallout Equestria that is literally 100 pages long, in a Microsoft Word format. 100 pages!
I mean this with all due respect, but I can't make shorter chapters. Even if I could, I wouldn't. There needs to be a story. There needs to be something worth reading, instead of just "They fought, he died, so sad." I won't squander my talent for someone else's desires.
I felt like it was a good episode, granted it had a lot of gory scenes but that's how screwed Fallout is so I see why the need to them.
I'm glad you and Pines get to work on this and hope your real life issues get resolved so you have a better life and more time to write.