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Why did you make chapter thirteen so disproportionately long?
Ok all caught up. Nice twin stories. Or is it 3 with current time....
Anyway love how dark you make their experiences and mysterious
we need another chapter
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Soon
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The plot will thicken soon enough... ;)
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I honestly don't know...
I remember thinking at the time that I wanted to properly convey what a full-on battle would feel like from the POV of a foot grunt if they were in something as hectic as what they were in:
An enduring confrontation, with a seemingly endless series of skirmishes to follow suit. Where it is fatiguing and grueling and time-consuming to experience it.
In hindsight, it was a poor decision to have the reader kind of suffer along with it. I am definitely thinking on revising that chapter somehow...
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ba-da- ba ba baaa
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soon
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=D
oh fuck
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Lmao This reminds me of DBZ Abridged:
"I need an adult-"
"I am an adult."