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It's all good! :) Only revving me up for the next bunch of chapters coming up! :D
He reached for paper and a pen? Don't you mean a quill?
Also fabulous!
Its great! The only criticism I have is in the beginning you don't need to recap what he said to sweetiebell, just a quick 'he told her etc...' would work. You seemed to fix that later though.
I really thought it was good though.
1002948 no I meant pen and paper. The kids use pencils in school so why wouldn't they have pens?
You need to check what you write before you post it. There is no deadline for when you need to update your story just check your spelling because at some points you had me confused beyond reason with the spelling otherwise good story
1004163 I suppose so. I just don't recall seeing that in cannon. I'll look again to be sure.
I thought the sexual part was a bit funny and really innocent on Rarity's part. Just experimenting for her but good times for Michael.
dude i am still dafuq-ing right now. seriously, how can anyone be that innocent? and how did rarity already know what " the special stallion juice" tasted like?
in all seriousness though, this story is fucking AMAZING! and i cannot overstate that enough.
Human xxx Pony
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2180416 duh maybe she had sex once before