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PonyOfTheFall
When you become a brony it takes you full force.
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"Ugh... Damn, why do I stay up so late when I know I'll regret it later?" Mike said as he shut off the alarm and rolled off his futon.
Pretty much every single fimfiction user is like this, am I right? Such is internet addiction...
Want MOAR!!! :D
Continue this. You must. It is your duty to the EMPRAH
A couple of typos but otherwise great start.
Aww yeah! Giggity, Giggity, Giggity Goo!
Interesting.
Okay a romance tag and it's rated mature, so which pony is he going to do the deed with?
994674 who says hes going to be with a pony? Did you not read the chapter where he has sex after going to a night club? That may be the only sex scene in the story.
994035 what is that about?
996125
after reading chess game of the gods too many times
i am rather suspicious of the hujkhjhhj
Love it. Looking forward to the next chapters to come! :)
Well I'm enjoying it!
Most enjoyable!
Daaaawwwwwwww!
Keep em coming!
More! :D
It's all good! :) Only revving me up for the next bunch of chapters coming up! :D
He reached for paper and a pen?
Don't you mean a quill?
Also fabulous!
Its great! The only criticism I have is in the beginning you don't need to recap what he said to sweetiebell, just a quick 'he told her etc...' would work. You seemed to fix that later though.
I really thought it was good though.
1002948 no I meant pen and paper. The kids use pencils in school so why wouldn't they have pens?
You need to check what you write before you post it. There is no deadline for when you need to update your story just check your spelling because at some points you had me confused beyond reason with the spelling otherwise good story
1004163 I suppose so. I just don't recall seeing that in cannon. I'll look again to be sure.
My response to this chapter due to lack of sleep.
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its meet not meat...hehe nice to meat you, I see what you did thar.
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FIRST!
1007876
Careful you can get banned for that.
Keep em coming!
If I would critique one thing, I mentioned in your last story of having him ramble to Rarity what he talked to Sweetiebell when she found them together. That was a bit much on the recounting things, HOWEVER don't be afraid to put a little more detail into the conversations. Instead of "He met granny smith and told her his story" have them converse a bit and then have him recount (quickly) about it. Just my two cents.
Still love it though
1008062 I didn't want to go too far into the minor characters as most of them will not be reoccurring. So a simple mention so people don't ask what happened to a character. It would be weird if Mike walked into the Apple's home and didn't meet Granny Smith. And when I ramble on its a reminder to the readers so they can recount the event that led up to the current one subconsciously.
1006976 There's an episode where Apple Bloom is writing in school with a pencil, in 'The Show Stoppers' Scoot is writing with a pencil.
1007876
Tears of laughter were shed! X,D
I don't have any favorite CMC, but I would go with Sweetie Belle she just so adorable.
No more rapid release chapters....?
*firey pits of hell start to rise from the ground*
Although, I guess I can wait for the next few chapters. But I can't at the same time! O_O Well, all the more to look forward too! :D
I eagerly await more!
*pulls out shotgun and candy bars and a wooden crate* Well this is gonna take a while for each chapter...
*pulls out a banjo*
"I couldn't help think about how soft her lips would feel around my- NEVER MIND!"
Someone's lewdness being interrupted by those two words always cracks me up. Especially when they do it to themselves.
"Hey, what I was your show and tell project?" I asked.
Methinks there should be an "if" in there.
Well thanks for the interesting story! I can't wait to see what will happen.
Good chapter. I nearly blew a fuse with that retarded comment. Couple that with
child/animal abuse saw me seeing red. I hate that with a neverending purple passion.
I feel bad for Derpy. :(
I just finished reading all 9 of your published chapters and i absolutely love it!!!
I can't wait for the next one to come out.
On a bit of a side note, i have a younger sister who suffers from autism. She is my little derpy hooves and i love her to death. keep up the good work
This Pleases me.
You get to live another day.
d'awwwwwwww
I like this!
Excellent!
This is to good so i need MOAR
This guy is my hero :3 First Vinyl than goin to Derpy :3
He is me hero :3
Makes me wonder what kind of things Scootaloo's uncle does to her, those creepy grins he gave means he does alot more than watch over her...
1054834now now now lets no forget rarity
1072166
...Vinyl went all out
And Derpy is best pony because of the eyes and because of this picture.
That one doesn't count :P Nothing happened except for the hand-job...er I mean hoof-job
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