Nice first chapter, though I have to ask. The two are still mentioned as "filly" and "colt". Are they underaged, or adults like Spike will be?

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i changed it
spike ages more rapidly than ponies but lives for longer

Fluttercord and CheesePie should have a nice partner swap~
or 4some hehe

Nice to see someone the classic Apple Caramel ship. Just to point it out, Dinky Doo with two O. Maybe you could include Dinky and Pip or Tootsie and Ruby with their lovers

Why does this have an anthro tag?

So this is a massive ship-fic... Hey, it's cool I don't judg-

"Twilight + Flash Sentry"

Well then, I see you're busy being a monster.

*Turns around and leaves.*

Poor sod ships the Flash, all those neg bombs. I won't fault you, but I do cringe seeing that name.

glad to see prism bolt again :) good job

but i like fluttershy adoptive daughter Anthea but anyways keep a good work :)

>not sunburst x starlight

Fun story, but still

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no their not in this story
in my universe their already married and have a daughter named Sunlight Bright (not my ship)

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who do u ship twilight with?

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idk what it means

8944337
should i remove it?

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threesome with pip dinky and tootsie?

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whos ruby

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It means humanoid. Basically means bipedal, hands, wears clothes, overall basically humans with fur, muzzles, tails, and wings/horns for pegasi, unicorn, or alicorns. And sometimes hooves instead of feet, but that's about half the time

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If you didn't know what it meant, why did you put it as a tag for your story?

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That could work.
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Ruby Pinch is a unicorn fiilly an the daughter of Berry Pinch, often potrayed as friend of Dinky and Tootsie.

Those aren't "ship names". Those are the names of the next-gen kids created by Kilala.

I'm sorry, but this had to be pointed out.

8945708
sorry

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berry punch?

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idk

8945525
oh

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Not Flash Sentry, his character is so transparent and bland, that it doesn't motivate a ship. Not that shipping needs reason, it just isn't a well liked ship. No matter what everyone says, it just doesn't make sense. They have no spark that I can see, his storyline is happily in an AU. Let me live that delusion, please. I can't stand EG being canon. Where he has more in common with Sunset Shimmer (EG:EF).

Then again, I don't do shipping really, so I have no dog in the fight. Shipping isn't canon, it won't become next weeks episode. It's all personal preference. If you like it, cool for you. Just, in a story driven plot based sense, he really isn't an ideal ship with any of the actual ponies. And, I don't entirely see him hooking up with EQ Twilight, since he had a thing for horse version of her, and she left, and the Twilight doesn't know him... Real cringy.

I both make a joke, and offer my pity for the neg votes you'll get from shipping him. The rest of the votes, I can't say. Might be all the shipping being done, too much of it? The off tags, something else? Sometimes you take a chance, and sometimes it works, this might not be one of those times. Hard to say when some negs are for making a shipfic alone. It's the internet, cold hard place most days.

Keep living the dream, whatever that is.

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This marevignette.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/1/1d/Berryshine_id_S1E12.png/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/240?cb=20120703225120

And this is her daughter Rubyvignette.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/3/34/Ruby_Pinch_ID_S2E3.png/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/240?cb=20120514003613

Does this help?

8946106
yes it does thanks

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Your welcome, looking forward to see the next chapter

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i ship eg twi with timber and sunset with eg flash
princess twi goes with pony flash