Sorry it took me so long to get around to this... Anywho, let's get started!
I liked what you did with the fight concerning Bittercup and Longshot, where he lapsed into the old habit of having a squadmate and that caused him to slip up. As for the combat itself? It was alright. A little clunky, but was definitely able to tell what was going on, especially where it counted the most.
Also I never thought about it before, but does Hydra work like that in Fallout Equestria? I don't remember it ever being used in a story (Disclaimer, though... I haven't actually read that many FO:E stories... sooooo... ) Not so much a critique as I just don't remember it ever being used.
Sorry it took me so long to get around to this... Anywho, let's get started!
I liked what you did with the fight concerning Bittercup and Longshot, where he lapsed into the old habit of having a squadmate and that caused him to slip up. As for the combat itself? It was alright. A little clunky, but was definitely able to tell what was going on, especially where it counted the most.
Also I never thought about it before, but does Hydra work like that in Fallout Equestria? I don't remember it ever being used in a story (Disclaimer, though... I haven't actually read that many FO:E stories... sooooo... ) Not so much a critique as I just don't remember it ever being used.
Good chapter! Looking forward to more!