Oh thank god, I seriously thought Bright Mac and Pear Butter were dead, and they'd disappear before getting to Sweet Apple Acres. That would've been emotionally devastating!
You know the first chapter I thought, “Why is this guy inspired by Lilo and Stitch? All he needs now is to write ‘Ohana means family, family means no one gets left behind.’.”
And I liked this chapter. But the backstory, you could’ve played more with it.
Oh thank god, I seriously thought Bright Mac and Pear Butter were dead, and they'd disappear before getting to Sweet Apple Acres. That would've been emotionally devastating!
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Nope. They're alive and healthy
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That's a nice change of pace.
this was such a sweet chapter! Good job, dude!
This is a really heart warming story great job bro
You know the first chapter I thought, “Why is this guy inspired by Lilo and Stitch? All he needs now is to write ‘Ohana means family, family means no one gets left behind.’.”
And I liked this chapter. But the backstory, you could’ve played more with it.
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True.
love it