Brisa I looked over at us with a smile on her face. Beisa walked over and grabbed her son under the arms then lifted him off my shoulders as he whines about it not wanting to get off my shoulders. I rubbed the little guys head as I felt a powerful magic signature coming this way maybe half of what Celestia has. I turned my head when someone entered my magic En zone. So I knew that they were at least a hundred and six feet away from me. ‘I’m so glad I magic this magic field.
Demiurge managed to grab my throat then he took me down into the streets scaring the fighter on the streets and nobles looking out their window. I kicked him in the gut with my knee forcing him to let go and I closed Faithkeeper. The swords vanished as I started to cast spells. “Seventh tier Holy smite!” A column of pure light fell down from the and inflicted massive damage to Demiurge. The ground around her cracked and he was pinned on his back to the ground.
It's a he not a she!
"A column of pure light fell down from the and inflicted massive damage to Demiurge." It should be
"A column of pure light fell down from the sky and inflicted massive damage to Demiurge."
Odd that Blaze even deems it necessary to mindcontrol Chrysalis. He did literally only positiv things to Changeling kind. At least i hope he releases her ones he rules they world peaceful.
“I have thousands of children what do you think I’m into?”
That is so open for interpretation... Also there is nothing wrong with it. In fact it helps Blaze plans. Changelings make bad soldiers, rather better spys,assasins,medical experts,ambassadors, mindworkers (research and development) etc.
Yes! MORE!
You mean "I'm so glad i have this magic field"?
that great to have Chrysalis on blaze side. what plan on the next chapter?
It's a he not a she!
"A column of pure light fell down from the and inflicted massive damage to Demiurge."
It should be
"A column of pure light fell down from the sky and inflicted massive damage to Demiurge."
Next chapter please?!
Odd that Blaze even deems it necessary to mindcontrol Chrysalis. He did literally only positiv things to Changeling kind.
At least i hope he releases her ones he rules they world peaceful.
Great chapter
That is so open for interpretation...
Also there is nothing wrong with it. In fact it helps Blaze plans.
Changelings make bad soldiers, rather better spys,assasins,medical experts,ambassadors, mindworkers (research and development) etc.
Hope for updates... Its been a wile