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Doesn't that go without saying?
That was a fun read.
So the mystery woman is Jolyne Kujo? Because that's the only female Jojo character that has the name "Jojo", given she's the part 6 protagonist. And her just showing up out of nowhere like that does seem like a deus ex machina, because I don't recall her showing up in any previous story, nor does she seem to have any explaination for her presence or anything about her.
So Rainbow Dash was being so thirsty because a changeling messed with her head as part if a plot, and the same with Dustin? Yeah, that would explain them both veing so strange. Plus it tells them they weren't actually in love, so they can go on with their lives just being friends without any of the forced relationship casting a shadow on them.
9991704
I refer you to this.
9991731
What do you mean no one noticed something so obvious, unless your talking about in the story itself then that is understandable
9991711
Ah, that's more like it. Even has a properly musical name for the Stand. Though her calling herself "Jojo" when she isn't a member of the Joestar family line feels a bit forced. The name Jojo would fit better if someone else called her it first, rather than her taking it for herself.
9991740
Story wise.
9991741
My running thought for that is it was the first thing she thought of when she got here and it sorta stuck.
9991742
Well this is an amazing story idea and I (personally) like all of it and when I say that I mean that I like all of this and the one shot stories that came before this one so thank you for creating this and goodbye.
9991750
Well I'm glad you're enjoying them.
Well that subplot was fully revealed and then quickly resolved. Are all the replaced dogs dead or were they changelings the whole tine? Also... WHERE THE HELL IS THE FIC WHERE PIEDMON SHOWS UP!?!
So, in the last few chapters you’ve been introducing a lot of rather random characters that everybody in-story treats like long time friends they already know from previous adventures, but that readers have not encountered before. No introduction, not even an existing character presiding over an “Oh, hay, guys, this is X, we kicked flank together when we did Y!” scene.
Just something to think about that you could work on.
10159612
If you're referring to Gilda, Garble, and Jojo, they were introduced here.
10159631
Yeah, that might do it. Definitely felt like there was something I was missing in my reread. None of the fics linked to that story as a sequel/prequel for some reason, and there wasn’t an author’s note like you set up for Dash’s little reality check from Gilda. Maybe add one?
There’s still other characters that have been mentioned in passing that haven’t been explained that I’ve seen. S-something-mon in Canterlot, the eggs by the Tree of Harmony in Dash’s story, Lilly whoever that is... still confusing but I’ll see if that fic helps with it.
10159688
Yeah that explained those three being together, but didn’t actually introduce them to any pony else. Is there another story I’m missing on that score?
10159728
There's quite a few things I'm still working on. I'm Implying that Jojo, Gilda, and Garble work for the Diarchy. Spike and Twilight have their own link to Celestia and Lilly.