A normal man who enjoys life to the fullest meets an untimely death in an accident. Now finding himself in a new world completely unknown to either him or any other human, he must now find a way to make it in this alien world.
8832053 Im glad that my story has your interests. This is my first time writing so I'm just seeing what works and what needs some work. But thank you very much for your comment, its appreciated.
Not enough to go by to make a like or dislike yet will wait for more. But good start non the less. Caught my attention since lightning master hasnt updated
8833945 Yeah I've never written a story before so this is all new to me. But I am going to make an effort to fix the problems and add more details to the story to make it have a more smooth flow to it.
Looks really interesting
You have my attention author
Well done
Well done 👍
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Im glad that my story has your interests. This is my first time writing so I'm just seeing what works and what needs some work. But thank you very much for your comment, its appreciated.
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I'm glad that you like it.
Interesting start I like it
Not enough to go by to make a like or dislike yet will wait for more. But good start non the less. Caught my attention since lightning master hasnt updated
Interesting idea, but it feels rushed and you should probably get an editor, but apart from that I am interested to see where this goes
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Yeah I've never written a story before so this is all new to me. But I am going to make an effort to fix the problems and add more details to the story to make it have a more smooth flow to it.