RIP Rumble. His hips never saw it cumming.

I can't wait to see Scootaloo trying to hide her enormous dick! It's been hard to find some good growth fics lately...

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I plan to keep making growth/expansion fics for the foreseeable future, so hopefully that'll fill a bit of the void.

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Thanks. It hasn't been the same since Megapone just outright ditched us...

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He truly was the master. Missing his content was one of my big motivators for trying to write, myself.

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I could write... if I didn't bore too quickly... sucks to write when you already know what happens in your own story...

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I find the hardest part isn't boredom, but second guessing myself. I have this vague notion of how the story goes in my head. But when I sit down to outline it, I don't quite capture the same essence, and the final draft can feel like a completely different story. Then I feel super insecure about the whole thing.

Anxiety is a hell of a drug.

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Ditto

One critique I would lile to make, is at times, your writing seems to almost get lost in explaining the expansion or feelings of the character you're writing about.

I've seen this with other writers as well, where it feels like we've found the reason they really wanted to write a fanfic, and they 'let it all out.'

Maybe going forward, try to 'tighten up' your descriptive texts about the girls and their growing assets.

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Thank you so much for the feedback! I definitely intend these to be more smut than actual art, but I appreciate your point. Fleshing out situations and characters can make things more engaging. I'm trying that more and more with each chapter

Since Scootaloo will get the, *ahem*, male reproductive organ growing, wouldn't there be a futa warning as well? (Not to be Captain Obvious but Scoots is a female...)

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I'm not the biggest fan of the "futa" nomenclature. Even though it's just Japanese for "hermaphroditic", it's become associated with trans slurs like "she-male" and "dick-girl", so I'm just choosing to avoid it. I was hoping just saying there are boobs and dicks would be enough.

She now sat alone in her bedroom, rolling a vile of the completed concoction

vial?

She still wore her lose fitting work jeans,

loose

Her formerly baggy shirt now sat taught between her shoulders and its tucked hem as she pulled back to her full height

to reveal a thin strip of taught, yellow flesh.

tight?

That ending, oh fucking god, that ending, lets hope arumble didn 't break any bones making love with his goddess