Geralt of Rivia thought he could retire in Toussaint with Yennefer. He thought wrong. An old enemy seeks revenge, and the fulfillment of a dark, personal goal lost in the history of Equestria.
Is the scene if Geralt fighting that female vampire in a barn an iconic Witcher scene or something? Because I have seen it in another Witcher-related story on this site.
Gaunter o' Dimm...I knew it! I had a idea to do an crossover with the Witcher universe, with Gaunter as the villain, but if somone has alredy done it, I need to wait two years so that no one will say I copied it.
Really, really good. The fight was perfectly paced and exciting. However, the dialogue at the end needs to be separated for different speakers. Remember, new speaker, new paragraph.
this first chapter was enough to make me reinstall and start where i left off in my Witcher 3 game never got to far cause my completionism got in the way. I only got to the city where Yenn is hiding and trying to find Ciri, I forget the name the zone with the 3 hag sisters the main city in that zone.
8809311 Basically, yes. Gaunter is on another level of villainy, as Heart of Stone shows, and shows exceedingly well. I'm doing my best to do him and The Witcher stories justice. I look forward to more reactions... because Gaunter has plans. Big plans.
Luna, shivering and trembling, clutched at her sister, "It- it was so evil, Tia. Worse then anything I had ever known. Worse then any of them... Sombra, Chrysalis, Tirek... even the Nightmare. It... It tried to make us hate him, sister. We can't do that. Whatever happens. We'll be playing right into its hands."
That, was freaking amazing to read.
Is the scene if Geralt fighting that female vampire in a barn an iconic Witcher scene or something? Because I have seen it in another Witcher-related story on this site.
Nice job. Hail, fellow Witcher fan!
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It is indeed.
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Very glad you enjoyed! More will be coming.
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Hail and well met! The ride begins.
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Hail!
love the start. NEED MORE!!!!!!!
Ahh Spike, never lose that..
Gaunter o' Dimm...I knew it! I had a idea to do an crossover with the Witcher universe, with Gaunter as the villain, but if somone has alredy done it, I need to wait two years so that no one will say I copied it.
Make it good!
That was amazing chapter. Hoping to see more.
Looking forward for more. Hope luna is ok.
Fixed some small errors. Equus for Equis and all that. Working hard on chapter 2 and plotting out more. Should update soon.
Really, really good. The fight was perfectly paced and exciting. However, the dialogue at the end needs to be separated for different speakers. Remember, new speaker, new paragraph.
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Excellent critique! Updated to reflect that. Glad you enjoyed!
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Glad I helped. I can't wait for more.
this first chapter was enough to make me reinstall and start where i left off in my Witcher 3 game never got to far cause my completionism got in the way. I only got to the city where Yenn is hiding and trying to find Ciri, I forget the name the zone with the 3 hag sisters the main city in that zone.
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My work is done.
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Basically, yes. Gaunter is on another level of villainy, as Heart of Stone shows, and shows exceedingly well. I'm doing my best to do him and The Witcher stories justice. I look forward to more reactions... because Gaunter has plans. Big plans.
It sounds like Gaunter O Dimm is doing this
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I just got to the authors note and I'm so glad I was right Gaunter was one of my favorite characters