Thrusted into an unknown world by the universe, will this human-turned-beast be able to accept his past and adapt to his new life? Or die trying? Let’s see what hell has in store for Santiago Alvarez.
I like this chapter, but I have a question, will Boreas be a secondary character or will he be another protagonist? personally, he is a character that I liked more than Santiago, he is an enigma since he was formed from a Wendigo but he proved to be able to feel sympathy towards other beings, it is a very interesting character that you could take as a protagonist making him have his own pow, as I said, is an interesting character that I would like to see more.
In short, I recommend you to develop more Boreas in the next chapter, he could be either an antagonist, or a powerful ally or a being that everyone thinks is bad but in reality it is good, so far, he is the best character in history until now
one more thing, in the story of Boreas, one passes directly from the princesses knowing Fernir's story to him going to the town to kill the Wendigo, it is not explained what happened in the town or where it is, I do not know if that just It happens to me or it is a problem of editing, please check it
9764580 He is a protagonist of sorts but is more neutral than being lawfully good. This being the case, because his Wendigo spirit leeched off Fenrir and had manifested itself sentience. His ’Moral Code’ was molded by Fenrir’s own Lycan Code, a rather neutral one too. Boreas will develop over the story, molding him into what I have planned for him.
9764598 I will reveal the settlement’s name soon. Also, I don’t know if something glitched out and it wasn’t stated that the ponies of the settlement directed Fenrir over to the forest, but I’ll check it out.
For those of you who follow this story, you’ll be wondering why this story is on Hiatus. Don’t worry, I’m still working on this story but I have become very sick and won’t be working on it until I get better. I’m predicting that I’ll be good in a few days, so please bear with me.
9906008 I’ve recently started to make decent progress on my third chapter. I won’t be that busy with school for the next couple of days, so within a week at most.
Dude you can’t make a second protagonist that surpasses your first so shamelessly. No offense but Boroes sounds amazing, his powers are an enigma and his personality is extremely more entertaining. Why would we want to keep following poor Santiago, he’s relatively weak, breaks down at an alarming rate and he’s quite frankly a little on the dumb side. I’m afraid that what’s gonna happen is that people are gonna be exited for Boreas story while getting bored by Santiago, I’ve read stories with multiple protagonist before and in very few I didn’t get bored of one protagonist.
10241576 That’s sort of the point, but I completely understand what you’re getting at. Yeah, Boreas surpasses Santiago so easily right now, but that’s because Santiago is human and not all that interesting as far as powers and a background go. It’s going to be a fight for him to adjust to his new body, new environment, magic, and overwhelming odds. So much has happened to him throughout the course of the story so far, of course he’d be overwhelmed mentally and make questionable decisions. I made Santiago a weak character intentionally to help with his character growth and make him more relatable. Well, that’s my goal at least. Hopefully with upcoming chapters, Santiago won’t bore you. Thank you for reasonably explaining your distaste with the character so far.
I like this chapter, but I have a question, will Boreas be a secondary character or will he be another protagonist? personally, he is a character that I liked more than Santiago, he is an enigma since he was formed from a Wendigo but he proved to be able to feel sympathy towards other beings, it is a very interesting character that you could take as a protagonist making him have his own pow, as I said, is an interesting character that I would like to see more.
In short, I recommend you to develop more Boreas in the next chapter, he could be either an antagonist, or a powerful ally or a being that everyone thinks is bad but in reality it is good, so far, he is the best character in history until now
one more thing, in the story of Boreas, one passes directly from the princesses knowing Fernir's story to him going to the town to kill the Wendigo, it is not explained what happened in the town or where it is, I do not know if that just It happens to me or it is a problem of editing, please check it
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He is a protagonist of sorts but is more neutral than being lawfully good. This being the case, because his Wendigo spirit leeched off Fenrir and had manifested itself sentience. His ’Moral Code’ was molded by Fenrir’s own Lycan Code, a rather neutral one too. Boreas will develop over the story, molding him into what I have planned for him.
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I will reveal the settlement’s name soon. Also, I don’t know if something glitched out and it wasn’t stated that the ponies of the settlement directed Fenrir over to the forest, but I’ll check it out.
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Thanks for check, and i be waiting for the next chapter
For those of you who follow this story, you’ll be wondering why this story is on Hiatus. Don’t worry, I’m still working on this story but I have become very sick and won’t be working on it until I get better. I’m predicting that I’ll be good in a few days, so please bear with me.
Don't stop this sh*t !!!
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This story won’t stop, I’ve just been very busy with school.
Hoooo okay go in peace brother and may God be with you
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Besides, I’ve got plenty of ideas that I really want to implement into this story
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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I’ve recently started to make decent progress on my third chapter. I won’t be that busy with school for the next couple of days, so within a week at most.
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SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dude you can’t make a second protagonist that surpasses your first so shamelessly. No offense but Boroes sounds amazing, his powers are an enigma and his personality is extremely more entertaining. Why would we want to keep following poor Santiago, he’s relatively weak, breaks down at an alarming rate and he’s quite frankly a little on the dumb side. I’m afraid that what’s gonna happen is that people are gonna be exited for Boreas story while getting bored by Santiago, I’ve read stories with multiple protagonist before and in very few I didn’t get bored of one protagonist.
10241576
That’s sort of the point, but I completely understand what you’re getting at. Yeah, Boreas surpasses Santiago so easily right now, but that’s because Santiago is human and not all that interesting as far as powers and a background go. It’s going to be a fight for him to adjust to his new body, new environment, magic, and overwhelming odds. So much has happened to him throughout the course of the story so far, of course he’d be overwhelmed mentally and make questionable decisions. I made Santiago a weak character intentionally to help with his character growth and make him more relatable. Well, that’s my goal at least. Hopefully with upcoming chapters, Santiago won’t bore you. Thank you for reasonably explaining your distaste with the character so far.