Pulled into Equestria: The fallen star

by TimeLordStudios

pulled into equestria part 2

Author's Note:

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part 2 takes place right after part 1 ALL criticism is appreciated

"So what is it like in your world." Starlight asked curiously. "Sorry I just wanna know."

"Well it isn't anything to brag about." I claimed hoping to change the subject. But it failed miserably.

"Well that's alright, but I STILL wanna know can you please tell me." She pleaded with puppy eyes so cute, All the cutest puppies in the world failed in comparison. After a moment of deliberation I finally caved in.

"Alright I'll tell you about it but not a lot. Just some key details in everyday life, that almost all the people in my world hears and knows about. That are MOST important in my opinion."

"Pe-people?" she asked confused. "What does that mean?"

"Oh right sorry. The term people, stands for my race in a group it's also a used as a broad term-"

"What do you mean by your race? You look like a pony to me unless- are you a changeling?!" she said loudly, cutting me off.

"NO!!-no I am not a changeling." I yelled defensively. "I was just referring to what I was before I was... Before I was pulled away from everything I knew. Before I was taken away from my world! To Equestria a world I know little about. Away from all those who cared for me. They probably think I just got up and left them." I said starting to tear up. "They won't know the truth about what happened to me and, even if they did find out what happened to me no one would believe them." I cried out, trying to pull myself together.

"Calm down, deep breaths I know it's hard to lose every thing close to you." She said trying to cheer me up. "But- I learned that if you hold on to those feelings of remorse and longing for what you lost. IT WILL! Lead you down a dark path. Trust me I've been there and done it already." She explained. "You need to let it go, Let all the tears out now and embrace all the new possibility's that your new life has to offer. That you couldn't do before. But for now, just let it all out."

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"Are you good now." she asked with a worried expression. "If so, can please! tell me about your world." she begged persistently.

"Alright fine I guess. I have already started explaining my world to before I... Before my little episode. So I guess I owe you an conclusion." I said pulling what's left of me together. "There is a lot of senseless violence, and conflict which usually evolve into war. Their is mur-murder which sadly is a common occurrence, though most of the problems in my world probably don't exist in equestria... Anyway that's only few things wrong with my home world, sorry but, I shouldn't go too deep into details just yet."

"Didn't you just promise me a conclusion a minute ago!" She asked angry while staring into my eyes. I could of sworn I saw a bit of blood lust in her eyes.

"I- I am - I will tell y-ou I just-just thought I should te-tell the whole group a-at the same time." I pleaded scared out of my mind writing a mental note, 'DO NOT CROSS STARLIGHT GLIMMER'." I kn- know you have the magic powers to get the answers out of me if I wasn't willing too." I stuttered still in fear for what might happen." But I am willing please don-don't hurt me." I pleaded as I dropped to the ground putting my hoofs over my face trembling in fear.

"...Wait who said anything about hurting you." She asked now looking worried, as if she just conveniently forgot what just happened.

"It was the look in your eyes I-I swear I saw a hint of blood lust, in your stare-your eyes." I explained still trembling in fear. "The lust for, The hunger for violence- I saw it in your eyes." I said as I struggled to lift my self off the floor.

"Here let me help." She said as her horn lit up as she engulfed me in her magical aura. Lifting me off the floor onto my feet hoofs. "I'm sorry if I scared yo-." She tried saying before being cut off near the end.

"IF YOU SCARED ME!..-DON'T I LOOK PRETTY SCARED TO YOU, I WAS FEARFUL FOR MY LIFE I-I THOUGHT YOU MIGHT JUST KILL ME." I yelled as my fear slowly turned into anger then to sadness. "Why does everything I do end with me in crying. I just don't know anymore. What is the point of living." I cried out with tears flowing down my face as I fell back to the floor crying into my hoofs.
{Starlight's POV}
"Look I'm sorry okay." I said now looking at the floor. I'm not the best in these situations but I can at least try to cheer him up. I thought as I trotted towards him. "Look I didn't mean to scare you, is there any way I can make it up to you. Anything if it's in my power- and is legal I'll try my best to get it for ,or do it for you. I said trying to cheer him up... most likely because she was the one who put him in this state in the first place.
{Blaze's POV}
"Can you teach me magic?" I asked, no longer filled with dread. I waited awhile for an answer but was given no response so I decided to ask again." Can you teach me how to use magic?" I asked again hoping this time she'd at least give me an answer. "How come you aren't responding. I'm serious I wanna learn magic..." I waited again but still no response. "You told me to in brace the new possibilities my new life has to offer. You said that didn't you. So why won't you help me." I cried out, starting to thing what she said was all just an act to cheer me up.

"I'm just shocked that that's what you want." She tried to explain "Out of all I could give you. You want to learn magic?"

"YES! That is what I want. Right now I am a unicorn without magic right now I'm weaker than Trixie... -TRIXIE!." I cried out.
"And, what's so shocking about a UNICORN wanting to learn magic! it's their birthright to use magic is it not. I may have not been born a unicorn but, I am one now."

"Right..." She said letting what I said sink in. "Right sorry. I'm so sorry I-." She tried saying but was cut off by a voice right by the door.

"Sorry it took me so long you wouldn't believe..." She started saying until she saw me crying on the floor. "Wait what happened here?" Asked twilight. "STARLIGHT, -WHAT...DID...YOU...DO!! Why is he crying? -I told you to watch over him not make him cry!" She yelled angrily.

"I-I didn't mean to hurt his feeling, Twi... - We just had a little misunderstanding. That was being resolved when you came in."

"is that right, Joe?" Twilight asked.

"Yeah that pretty much sums it up." I said between sops.

"No hard feelings right...Right?" Starlight asked.

"We will see in the future but, for now no promises. Can't say for sure if I'll completely get over this but we'll see in time." I said as I lifted my self off of the floor.
{Starlight's POV}
"Close enough I guess." Just wish I can make it up to him some how. He was alone and scared and I pressured him to talk when he wasn't ready to do so. How much have I really learned about friendship If this is the best I can do.
{Blaze's POV)
"Are you still up for explaining it to my friends or will we need to postpone?"

"I'm fine. Most of the 'misunderstanding' happened because I wanted to wait for the group to arrive to explain in detail so now I feel like I have to do it."

"You don't have to force yourself if you don't want to but, if you insist I'll go get them" I gave her a slow nod .That was all she needed. she trotted out to bring her friends inside of the planning room. About a minute has passed before she returned with her friends by her side.

"wait uh apple picking minute- who's that, Twi?" asked AJ

"his name is Joe, applejack" pinkie replied before I could say anything

"That's a strange name I wonder who came up with that." Rainbow dash snarked joke-fully. Chuckling slightly while doing so.

"Oh my! your mane. Orange on white that's simply dreadful!-" screamed rarity.

"Are You kidding, rarity!? His mane looks cool,- but not as cool as mine about 5% less cooler."

"thank you, dash for the compliment."

"hey! only my friends can call me dash."

"sor-sorry- we can be friends right...right?"

"we'll see if your cool enough later."

" I guess that's good enough for me, rainbow dash."

"now that that's over are you ready to tell your story?" asked twilight looking very impatient but I can't blame her.

"OOO story! I like story's what's it about? asked fluttershy

"I think he is going ta tell us if we quiet down and Listen fluttershy."

"right sorry applejack, please continue, joe."

"thank you, so this is how it all started..."

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After the long half baked explanation was given they all looked at me with surprised and shocked expressions.

"How do you know all of this." they all asked except twilight and pinkie pie for obvious reasons.

"Didn't I just explain that to ya'll already? Oh well might as well tell ya'll again. I am a human or was to be more exact. From a different human world than the one twilight knows about ya'll might but, I don't think any of ya'll besides twilight, and starlight and spike had entered through the portal if i'm correct. anyways that's the best I can explain it at the moment."

"have you tried teleporting back." asked twilight completely oblivious to the fact that I can't use magic.. yet.

"I can't." I stated plainly,

"why not?" She asked.

" because I don't know how to use magic. Even if I wanted to try I can't."

"Wait! you don't know how to use magic?" twilight asked looking shocked and slightly confused.

"what I've only be a unicorn for-for... how much time has passed since I got here... I been a pony for about 3 hours maybe more I'm surprised I can even stand let alone walk straight. And you're expecting me to know magic automatically. I Don't think it works like that twilight. I'm afraid to even try to use my magic because I don't know how to control it ether."

"_ummm Sorry to Interrupt but I really need to get going. It's getting dark and I have yet to feed angle bunny and the other critters."

"And I must get back ta ma farm I need ta get up at the crack of dawn tomorrow for some early bucking."

"Alright I understand see ya later you too...Wait where am I going to stay, I have nowhere to live?" I said starting to panic.

"You can stay at the castle if you want and, in the morning I can teach you how to use magic how does that sound." said twilight.

"Sounds good for me."

As everypony besides twilight and starlight left. I started to think about my new life here I'm actually going to learn magic I might be happy here but..."joe... JOE! wake up." twilight said snapping me out of my trance.

"Sorry I zoned out a bit. That happens a lot when I have a lot to think about. My mind gets overwhelmed by my thoughts and reality fades until someone or somepony snaps me out of it." "Do you-"

"Yes I got a map and I already marked your room on it." She said knowing what I was going to ask. " Just follow me to your sleeping courtiers." She said as were walking.

"Can you call me blaze..." I asked while we were walking down the hall.

"Why? I thought your name was joe." she asked.

"It is but I thought I should come up with a pony-like name if I'm going to live here for a while so I came up with blaze star to complement my mane. though just call me blaze. "I said, Technically I wasn't lying because that's how I came up with the name after creating my OC.

"Makes sense I guess." She said as she stopped in front of a door. "Well here we are blaze, see you in the morning." she said as she opened the door to show me inside.

"See ya, goodnight, Twilight." I said as I entered the room.

"Night, blaze." She said as she yawned a bit. leaving and closing the door behind her.

"Wait how am I suppose to get in bed if I cant use my horn yet. Oh well I'll find a way..."

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Comments

[TimeLordStudios]

8829039
part 2 is out now

[DisplacedWriter]

You might want to get yourself an editor.

[Mix-up]

Hum, you might have wanted to look it over another time before publishing this chapter, you when the writing you missed as few capitals and a punctuations here and there a few jumps in ideas in the same sentence structure along with a few repeat of the same words right next to each other.

Now with that out of the way, I thought it was odd that her suddenly was scared of Starlight like and break to tears so easily? I wonder if it's because of the shock of being in another land and being in a new body might have catch up on him. Wonder why Startlight seemed so aggressive all of the sudden with Joe, I wonder if she further be antagonistic with him in the story? Not sure why he would just deride to change his name sudden like that sense he isn't expected to stay there for long at least, could be that it is in part because he was living the brony dream of being in Equestria, with his mind possibly confused he might have just wanted to latch on what seemed positive to him, not sure if Twilight is going to keep finding that odd, still he does sound really childish in insisting in learning it now, then again it's a once in a life time opportunity for him. So why does Twilight derided to teach him like that sense the have to focus on getting him back home, unless she always take some pride in teaching a new comer to this world what is magic. I think AJ's attitude in just leaving Joe to Twilight's care was absolutely reasonable, sense magical dimensional hopping is way out of her applebucking department, and the same would be likely for the others.

Good luck on your next chapter.

[TimeLordStudios]

Mix up some of most of the word repeats are stutters

[Mix-up]

8874486
If that is the case then use suspension points (...) to indicate that someone is stuttering . Good luck

[TimeLordStudios]

Chapter 3 is almost done