Butter Nut returns to Ponyville after leaving for Canterlot Culinary School, to find his old school friend Applejack has grown into quite the mare. The only problem is, her growth doesn't seem to be stopping anytime soon...
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Some fair critique, always welcome of course. I'll address your points in order.
1. Some of the speed of the writing had to do with the project itself starting as short snippets of life. This was originally a commission by jsk244 to have fun little slice of life stories about him and Applejack as she grrew bigger. As we progressed we began to structure it more until finally it became a novel. A general plot was devised and placed in some chapters, but largely the original format is still there. This isn’t something for people looking for a thrilling adventure but more the general audience of macro pony lovers to enjoy. With a touch of mystery.
2. A bit of the above applies to this as well. Since it was slice of life snippets a lot of the general panic or planning to fix it wasn’t thought about. Once the story began to progress we decided to treat it like how the series itself deals sometimes with odd or crazy things - with a touch of ‘meh’ and a lot of ‘huh’. Sure there’s panic and concerns at times, albeit more in the future stories tied into this series, but otherwrise it’s similar to how the Monster Registration Act handles it. Typical Ponyville day to dayness. The Manehatten chapter was a bit silly admittedly for putting her there without more panic, but I can’t imagine a world where dragons, sirens and changelings exist (oh my) would have much to panic about a giantess waltzing around if she’s not outright attacking things. If anything jsk244 feels it’s amusing to imagine everyone going about their days gripping about not seeing around her legs more than ‘oh god she’s going to crush me’ or ‘oh god my cart!’