A story about the trials and hardships that come with being different. And how peace can be achieved between two species that have fought for over two hundred years
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Yay Fallout!
Well, you're off to an interesting start, I'll have to keep an eye on this one.
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Thank you. I'm glad I've caught your attention. I hope everyone will enjoy it.
Yea no... Sorry but why would anyone go to the enemy and ask them to help build your bunker? That would be like a guy running a drug lab calling to the police, asking them to check his gear out and all was sat up properly. That, and the fact that we get a really really dry exposition dumb thrown at us after going trough a prologue that already explained stuff, sadly made me give up on this story when "the guardian" was mentioned and how our main character undoubtedly are gonna end up as one of those things.
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Sorry your not enjoying it. Also not sure what you mean by going to the enemy and asking to build a bunker. Stable 100 was founded by a pony corporation and a tribe of zebras working together to bring back the Trial of the Stars, and the Guardians along with it. They paid Stable-tec to build it because they had the knowledge and the technology. Not all Zebra tribes were with the Caesar during the war. And more information about Guardians and the Trial will be released in future chapters. I didn’t want to just throw it all at you guys in one long explanation. I hope you give me another chance as I hope to improve over time.