Also, I'd to say that the place— unless you did this on purpose— was not called Equaltown; it was called Our Town.
At least, I'm pretty sure it was. Well, I'm certain it wasn't called Equaltown.
If you decide to stick with Equaltown, go ahead; I just wanted to point that out.

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lol I think equal town is better.

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""Fandom can decide what to call the village" in M.A. Larson's opinion"

It has no official name.

Starlight looked on in anger, slightly confused at how her spell, one that she had studied for years, could just be blocked so easily. “Wh- I studied that spell for years! How can you-” she started but was cut off by Twilight.

Not sure if she trained between then and when she was as strong as Twilight, but I like to believe in her power. I only say this, because even if I knew it would happen it is kind of a bit sad, just like everytime when they kill Chrysalis in a story.

That and "Twilight no one asked you to tell her about your life and the glory of being a friendship stutend.

“You ruined everything for me, the least you can do is let me go so I can be by myself!” She shouted in a very angry tone at Rainbow who was just hanging there by her tail, now looking at Starlight with a very hard glare. In the few seconds it took Starlight to say that, however, Twilight had recovered, and was now upon Starlight, literally slamming into her.

Okay now the chase could finally stop, I don't need to see how awesome they were while catching Starlight.
Just to be sure, I'm not angry, this is just casual talking you could say.

“Sure thing Twi, I got one right here!” She replied, reaching into her mane with a hoof, and pulling out a small golden ring with engravings etched around the outside. “I always keep one on hoof in case of evil unicorn dictators being captured!”

HHHHHHmmmmm really not sure about this one.

I have to ask something. I don't remember them in the show and needed to know again, if they couldn't just pull them off with their own hooves.
I just forgot what prevents them from doing that, either their own brain or some sort of spell.

Why did she got a gag?
I seriously thought when Twilight spoke in town, she planned to explain something about Starlight possible reasons, just to give them something to think even if it would have been only a small hint.

“Well, I guess we could stay for a while…”

Not a good idea because of Starlight. They would need to make sure that they don't attack her during the party.

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