Keep it up. I look forward to more!

This has potential.

Interesting, I'll definitely be keeping my eye on this story.

One quick question though. When he says he'll tear down the world and anyone who gets in his way of returning home. Is he going to follow through with that or will he give up part way through and just build a new life in Equestria?

Personally I hope he stays true to his goal. It's always fun to see a human turned pony go to war with the girls and the princesses.