8553304 You need an editor my friend. Quite a lot of grammatical errors. For instance, when you do dialogue, you don't put a space between the quotation marks and the first word.
There are other errors as well. You should look into getting an editor
Also it takes a hell of a lot longer than 2 months to plan a wedding. Hell it takes 2 months just to get all the invites out and make reception reservations
8553304
You need an editor my friend. Quite a lot of grammatical errors. For instance, when you do dialogue, you don't put a space between the quotation marks and the first word.
There are other errors as well. You should look into getting an editor
Also it takes a hell of a lot longer than 2 months to plan a wedding. Hell it takes 2 months just to get all the invites out and make reception reservations
8620688
I intend to fix every mistake in the story that I have made and thank you for pointing them out