The sparkling Rainbow
written by silvercrystal432
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great job so far. cant wait for more
I am working hard to get each chapter out for you to enjoy, the next chapter the date will be out today or tomorrow it depends if i have the time.
thank you
There is never enough
Please link the picture properly by the way.
https://30clock.deviantart.com/art/Twidash-430576525
hey man I'm gonna keep reading your story and see how it goes, but I would suggest that you could improve the dialogue, the things twilight and Rainbow say are robotic and developed, I think it would be great if they seemed more real. Anyway keep writing and I'll keep reading