Just so that everyone knows, I know I am misspelling words and rushing these chapters out. It's because i'm juggling this story with my school work and it keeps getting harder on me, i'm stressing out trying to complete this story and do my school work at the same time and I don't have time to get each chapter proofread before it's put up. So from now on I will put a chapter up every Friday so it's perfect before it gets put up.
8553304 Have you never been on a date before? The way you described their dresses was like really formal wear. You don't go see an action/adventure movie in formal wear. You wear formal wear to fancy restaurants and formal events.
Umm, you are missing some very basic things, like capital letters in the beginning of sentences.
Just that makes it look really sloppy.
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Well he wanted to give us the chapter asap. Typos can happen that's what proofreaders are for
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/27/the-proofreader-group
Just so that everyone knows, I know I am misspelling words and rushing these chapters out. It's because i'm juggling this story with my school work and it keeps getting harder on me, i'm stressing out trying to complete this story and do my school work at the same time and I don't have time to get each chapter proofread before it's put up. So from now on I will put a chapter up every Friday so it's perfect before it gets put up.
thank you
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Have you never been on a date before? The way you described their dresses was like really formal wear. You don't go see an action/adventure movie in formal wear. You wear formal wear to fancy restaurants and formal events.