When the stars align an opportunity arrises, an opportunity for Luna to vist her secret little world, but when Twilight interupts her spell and gets dragged along the pair is unable to return home, forcing the two to bond, fight, and live together.
You should put thoughts into quotations of some kind. They're a bit difficult to pick out in the middle of a paragraph.
8562440All thoughts are in italics which is grammatically correct.
8562440If you have trouble distinguishing then try a different reading format.
This has my interest and my attention...
You should put thoughts into quotations of some kind. They're a bit difficult to pick out in the middle of a paragraph.
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All thoughts are in italics which is grammatically correct.
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If you have trouble distinguishing then try a different reading format.
This has my interest and my attention...