Damn it took me 2 months people, can you please help out a poor fellow in need? I will give you my skype as well so you can contact me on the fic, real time chat can help a lot more than you think because you'll know immediately about what i'm doing.
Also i'm tired as buck.

Well Sir I don't know how you make it. But you nearly fucked up this story for me with this second chapter.
Ok, I did love the sex scene with Spike and AJ. The story about how the CMC have been ding for the last few years, etc. But what was all that about teachers masturbating and probably having sex at Cheerliee's school? I know this is a clopfic, But it's a freaking kindergarten for Christ sake... Maybe I'm being too moralist I know, and I'm sorry for that, but there must be limits and it really was disgusting for me. Also turning Cheerliee, the CMC and probably all the mane six into lesbians (or biosexuals, whatever)... Again, perhaps I should have expected some of that... But now I can't help but wonder: What's gonna happen to the romance with all this going on?

1313732 Ah, damn i think another revision on my end. I've been running on a short fuse at the moment forgive me if i can't write well, writers block. Need help. Lots of help.

1313784 I don't belive it has something to do with you writting well or bad, but rather the ideas you're using. Chapter 1 was a big promise. Chapter to changed a lot from what I expected of that promise, but no everything is lost. Though I really hated some parts Like Cheerliee masturbating in front of Spike without a care like she was just an average whore or something. I'd like to se more romance.
But in the end, this is your story, and I'm not part of it. I'm only here to enjoy and, in turn, to judge. But, just like Obi-Wan told Anakin: Do not fail yourself. If this is how you want to carry on with this story, will go for it. Besides, I can bet, I'm gonna be one of the very few whos gonna complain about any of this.

1314394 Hmm, this is going to have to take a bit... deadlines everywhere. love of feth need help.

1314426
No you don't. You only need to have faith in youself. But if you insist... I could give you mis msn.

good job! it did take a while, but was worth every bit of it, and more!!!!

Damn that was good and funny. Cant wait to see more just take your Time.

Wait, she wants to publish them and isn't going to at least anonymize them? Also what Rennes said.